So I wanted to show the class what I had produced so far, so I could get a some feedback on what I need to improve.
I had various things that were pointed out to me in the discussion on what I needed to do to improve my, in the vector section it seemed that it looked like there was two light sources, which completely eluded me and I thought about it carefully and it did seem like there was two light sources. this was the only problem as far as the first segment goes.
As for the second segment, the biggest problem was that it felt to static and there was nothing going on except for the drop of the word and it being pushed up by the finger, It seemed like the finger was a middle finger and the arts logo dropping seemed to subliminally state the channel is falling in a certain way.
taking on this criticism I had to come up with another Idea. I thought about using the halftone effect more as I didn't think it was used enough.
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